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Malicai

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Michelle Lynn is my real name.
Always helping others I proclaim.
Looking for friends and poets feeling the same.
Instantly recognizing those who deserves the fame.
Comments on poems I'm sincere, never lame.
Afterall, it's friendships I've gained.
It's here, where I found my flame



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its me ~ An Acrostic write

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A contest entry

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower gold member
    September 14

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    This is beautiful. As I read this I was so drawn in. You made me feel each & every word you have written here before us. I love all poetry. I to have met so many amazing people here with such great talents. Also I have felt like I have found a new home, a place to be just who I am. Thank you for sharing. Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    September 4
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    very clever and well written...


  • Frodofan silver member
    August 8
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    Check line four for a typo.

    Neat acrostic. Sure many feel the same about our dear AP.

  • marsu
    August 3
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    Nice poem, good form
  • ian sawicki silver member
    July 17

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    a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly, nice to meet you again, don't mind me i am just off it as always


  • Evinde
    July 9
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    Liked this one, a steady flow and a good overall conclusion. Didn't find any errors.

  • james119
    March 14
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    nice...


  • Wati
    February 17
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    I agree this does fit you perfectly. Well done


  • grannyeri gold member
    August 27, 2007

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    This says so much about you anad your name on this site. Liked this acrostic - with the rhyme as well - not often one sees both together. Nice HM to add to your collection as well.


  • star wars fanatic
    August 9, 2007

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    Congrats on the hm and being you! I like the way you made this rhyme, and yes, it sure sounds like you.


  • vibiesh
    August 1, 2007
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    Thou art a wonder

    I realy enjoyed your poem
    Great , keep writing my dear friend
    Blessings
    Vibiesh


  • dixiebme
    July 22, 2007

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    I love your name! I also like your author name! You are one, you are both! And, both are good! Hope, you win with this one!


  • no-longer-a-member-
    July 19, 2007

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    Hm... it doesn't have the 'normal' left flush that you find with acrostics, but this looks wonderful, and frankly, much better.... I like this poem, for it reveals so much about your person in just a few words congrats on the HM!


  • Zephyr Aryn
    July 16, 2007

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    Nice acrostic! You even got all the ends of the lines to rhyme. I love the picture...or the background. However you got the flame there. (Sorry, but my tech skills are the pits...) I like your sincerity, too...That's kind of why I came here to give you a comment!

  • Griswold silver member
    July 15, 2007

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    Very nicely done, flows very nicely for an acrostic, which is very hard to do sometimes. Beautiful job...Scott


  • Ephiphany gold member
    July 15, 2007
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    Im diggin this....

    very good, love the flame part....fire and desire...thanks for your entry
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