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Sore Throat

Ouchie...my throat hurts
I think I'm gonna
tie it with some shirts

Don't worry little friend
I will help you
and give you my hands to lend

Once it gets all better
we'll put on our little sweater
and sing a little ditty
or maybe something that's even witty




A contest entry

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    July 15, 2007
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    Good poem. Thanks for entering my contest.
    Lots of luck to you.
    Brian


  • pearl-dragon
    July 15, 2007
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    This is so sweet...even little boys can be nice to each other. Thank you for entering our contest.