you just had to be the person
that totally stole my heart
it had to be u,
that filled in that missing part
of the puzzle, the puzzle of my love
you completed that puzzle, completed me
made me someone i never knew i could be
baby, my love,you completed my life
and someday, one day,i want to be ur wife
it had to be you
had to be the one i gave myself to
if i ever lost u i dont know what i'd do
you jus had to be the one who earned all my love
it's you, who i'd swear to up above
that i'll be with you forever
i'm not gonna lose you and i mean never
my mind is heavy but this much is true
till the day i die, it will always be you
A contest entry
- Love! by warrior-eagle.
600 points, ended October 15, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gentle Love by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended December 1, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Dedications by Blooming Poet.
440 points, ended January 3, 2008, 53 entries
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I'm so glady ou could find someone who would fill that missing part in, because it takes a while sometimes. Sweet and very true.
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Love is a very powerful emotion and it can create Romeo and Juilet emotions. It is hard to be in so deep that you don'y know how to live without that person. Thank you for entering my contest, best of luck to you.
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Tell me which option for a detailed comment. But I think this might be what I am looking for. So just tell me which topic idea you used
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i used the "young love, future plans option
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"if i ever lost u i dont know what i'd do"
That's a scary thought isn't it? it holds us back. Don't ever let it hold you back!
Stay happy!
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This is good. I would advise though that you change "u" to "you" and correct your spelling errors, but other than that it looks great and definitely comes from the heart of a woman in love. Keep up the good work.
Cj
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Aw.this was cute.
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Nice poem. It's always nice to find that one person who sweeps us off our feet. You expressed your feelings and thoughts very well. Great job!
HoneyFire!
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NICE
GREAT poem I just hope it's true for u and HIM. U already know I feel the same about mine.
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aaw, kaila and Eltee sittin in the tree, h-u-m-p-i-n... no let me stop, but this is good yo'. It took ya'll ong enough though. LOL
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awesome poem I totally feel what you feel for my better half
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