When you feel there is no hope at all,
That all you are made of is ready to fall.
When everyone is wearing coats of lies,
When truth and justice seem contrite …
Remember the blue of light.
That is the brightest in the night.
The universe will and does unfold as only it can
And no matter what, on your feet you’ll land.
When your spirit can do naught but scream.
And your nightmares become the dream.
The coats will win their game of hate
And love is not part of all they take.
Remember the blue of light.
That is the brightest in the night.
The universe will and does unfold as only it can
And no matter what, on your feet you’ll land.
Love is what will pull you through.
Love is what will allow you to continue.
When they throw you to the lions den
Expecting you to swallow deceit again …
Remember the blue of light.
That is the brightest in the night.
The universe will and does unfold as only it can
And no matter what, on your feet you’ll land.
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DragonBlue
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A contest entry
- Even when your hope is gone, move along by Barely Breathing.
450 points, ended June 21, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Closing The Door To Your Past by Viyanna Rosemarie.
1233 points, ended September 21, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This must be a longer version of the one that I have just read. This is just as beautiful and I loved the imagery in this one. All the best.
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Nice work! This poem really suits the photo... I really liked the lines:
"When you feel there is no hope at all,
That all you are made of is ready to fall.
When everyone is wearing coats of lies,
When truth and justice seem contrite...
Remember the blue of light."
Keep up the good work, and good luck in the contest!
-Sally -
Wonderful and magical with its repetition and
faith in the promise of being. You have put
much love and strength into this one, it pours
from the page. Your sis Blue
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Thank you Blue, I am kind of suprised to see you scanning my page. Figured you would be busy judging your contest...thanx again! Love & Light Sis!
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db
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A different take.. a nice poem overall. Very beautiful.
thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest
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A very lovely entry for the contest and so beautifully penned. Well done and good luck.
Shaz xx
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Love indeed...is all we need. Wonderfully written. I enjoyed this very much. I love the alternate repeating of the 4 lines...very effective. Well done. ~ Sue
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A wonderful poem that shows that in the end love will be the winner.For anything else is destructive.Love never is or should be.You are correct with love we can conquer any obstacle placed be fore us Thank you for entering Good luck in the contest
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