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Banished from the realm of light,
she lies inside with a mistake.
Shot down to Hell in other loss,
and stale companion-- Flirting Fairy.
One cursed with the same fault,
And settling with the same fate.
Angel's judged sin was: No self restraint.
She flirted with all of the saints.
She wasn't discreet and did so openly.
And went to be caught by God Himself.
Her ways were sure; She couldn't change.
And so, was sent from the on High.
She's now in an loss with no other contact.
Sleep tight, My Dear.
Let tonight Hold you softly.
Stay pure inside for when this ends,
we'll want you on our side again.
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Author notes
Option---- Tell me her story
PICTURE INSPIRED (picture's in contest page)
"Was she forced from heaven by a human gun?" (Comment: Interesting!! never would have thought that. awesome idea.)
A contest entry
- Shot Down Angel by Dead Hair.
450 points, ended July 28, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love the ending
'Stay pure inside for when this ends,
we'll want you on our side again.'
Even though she was sent away, she is not forsaken forever. It also somehow calms me that The Shot Down Angel was not a bad person, per say. Just human.
Btw, RIP, I can tell this is your work from a mile away!
Your work is so unique, be proud! 
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you are SO sweet!!!!
i had to re-read what you said. 
you're so sweet
thanks so much for the HM. and for hosting the contest. it was SO much fun and i had that angel on my desk top picture for forever!
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