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Real Beauty

My beauty might fall outside of your norm,
My  body might be in an unpleasant form.
But beauty is not found just in your skin,
It's something that lives deeply within.
It's a bottomless trust, a love, and a dream-
It lives in your eyes- an intriguing gleam.
The world is just filled with un-innocent lies!
They make you desire, you just need to buy
All the potions and lotions and diet-y pills
The skinniest clothing with all of the frills...
The thing of it is, none of it matters.
The seat of your beauty, no nothing may shatter!

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Im sewing myself together because Im falling apart *as required by contest judge*

I want to add that I totally am into the idea of this contest! the name really caught my eye, so, thanks for running it!

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  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    July 15, 2007

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    I love it! This is exactly what Im looking for! I feel that you get what I was saying! Thank you for entering!


  • Madison Mary
    July 14, 2007

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    This is such a true poem. Well done, amazing write. You have pulled off the rhyme beautifully. It flows and nothing sounds forced. Overall this is just a very empowering piece. Keep up the awesome and inspirational work!
    Madison xoxo