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Taken To The Grave

Everything falls, Dropping down
Through the Darkest hole
No floor in sight

I drift along
Falling
Down

No one ever listened to me
As I screamed about the pain
Why am I the one who is always to blame

Along I fall with all I hold dear
I have become nothing
there is nothing left

The end will come
Unexpected and unnoticed
Landing on the bottom all becomes clear

My life was void
Controlled by my fears
It should have been led by what I held dear

Visions appear of the help I gave
All efforts lie with me in my grave
Useless and void like the life I lived

I now understand
The worth I
Missed

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  • Elizabeth883
    July 14, 2007
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    I really hope one day I can join your club of self worth. It seems a lot of people really don't believe they are worth anything- and it makes me very thankful that you now realize it.

    "My life was void
    Controlled by my fears
    It should have been led by what I held dear"

    Isn't that the truth.


  • realist07
    July 14, 2007
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    very nice

    ohh very nice rythem nice work would you like to join my club just want to be heard