Time to overthrow the heavens was here
using the pain and sorrow of damned souls,
Satan manifests a platform of fire.
An army of demons called out the charge.
As the fires of hell lift up in the sky,
pushing up with incredible power,
like an eruption from a volcano.
The hellions readied their stalwart strike.
Celestial beings prepared for battle,
as heaven's gate shook with mighty force.
Call to duty, as angels sound the horns
drawing their steel swords the angels defend.
Darkness rises up to engulf the light
as demons penetrate the sturdy gate.
Lightening flashes from the clash of swords.
Discontent of the downcast rages on.
Satan uses all his power and spells
to weaken the angels fearless virtue.
The war for heaven in sickening sound
rips right through the calm of a moonlit night.
Caught in-between, earth will suffer foremost
for the rage and envy of the wicked,
as the battle they will certainly lose
rumbles and roars with terrible ire.
And Lucifer will cry his tears of loss
when heaven once more reigns triumphantly.
His evil intent will shudder and die
in resounding hallelujah chorus.
As tears of heaven echo for the slain,
the battle raged through the day and night,
Angels guide gives confidence of the win
pushing the demons back to where they belong.
Back into darkness, to languish below
the army of light sent minions of hell,
in cries of hurt and of tormented pain
the devilish uprising comes to end.
Author notes
Collaboration between Kahliya and Malicai
Form: 4 line stanzas - 10 syllable non rhyming lines
Prompt: 'It was as though the devil himself cried tears of pure sound' - Phantom ~ Susan Kay
A contest entry
- Round Three by Porcelain Princess.
300 points, ended July 17, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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should have known...
that a collaboration between Kahliya and Malicai would be so amazing!! -
OOPs the rest missed off...??? I had more... LOL .... So, I continue here... I really like the way this turn out. You've help turn this piece into a treasured piece. It is written so, I want to scripture like... you would think it was at once a real heavenly battle. Thank you for the collabration I did enjoy the fun!
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Thanks for the fun girly.... I really like the way this turn out.
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wowii to perfection!
YOUR perfection....
and Malicai's
I loved the ending
how you brought it to a close...
and at the beginning, you went straight into the story. wow.
awesomely done
good luck
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