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Frozen Tree

Trees loose leaves in winter
Gain them back in fall
but this tree is diffrent
it is frozen in time
won't grow another inch
or bear another leaf
i couldn't bear seeing it chooped down

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just wrote it bored

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    Ok then. lol


  • S A Adelmann
    July 30, 2007
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    Apparently, your GPA does not include a grade for spelling: "lose", "different", and "chopped".


  • chicinchaos
    July 30, 2007
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    Poems don't need to rhyme and as far as i'm concerned, this is pretty good!


  • Lyns xOx
    July 14, 2007
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    Gay i rate another poem of mine GAY!!!