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 Footsteps in the Sand

 

Footsteps in the sand
Vanish with the coming tide,
This is just like life

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image from google...

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  • jewlinz
    February 5, 2008
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    I live this Hiku! I can't see the google picture but I can Imagine what it lookes like. Great Job!


  • azure85 gold member
    July 14, 2007

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    Very thoughtful, this is very good indeed. Your last line shows some good thoughts, and your graphic is delightful. Thank you for such a lovely haiku.


  • Amera gold member
    July 14, 2007

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    How true and how beautiful is this little verse. It makes us stop to think. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera ♥