Sadness Written By Lisa Morris
Sadness cannot be denied
It will find you when you sleep
And even though you try to hide
It brings the tears you weep
It tears away your will to live
And takes your soul to squeeze
Loneliness is what it will give
As you slowly hit your knees
Author notes
Short.....Sweet.....and to the point.....DarkestAngel68
A contest entry
- SHORT POEMS PART 2 by Blooming Poet.
700 points, ended March 23, 2008, 129 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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We all have sadness and you captured that feeling very well here. I love it in everyway.
Really like this part:
It tears away your will to live
And takes your soul to squeeze
Lonliness is what it will give
As you slowly hit your knees
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beautiful
very well written, thanks and good luck -
Very nicely done...
I like it!
Thanks..
*PEACE*
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i was looking for left aligned free verse, lovely but not really right for this contest....
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I can really relate to this...short and simply put to the point..thank you so much for sharing with us!!
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