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Night of darkness

blinding lights glare her eyes
a sign of insecurity flares the life
dismal rain disperse the fear
black cats crawl towards her corpse
ripping her skin like yesterday's paper
ghouls and bats fly, dripping in red
staining the pearl colored dress to crimson
yearning for pleasure from innocent lives
haunting shadows appear from screams
the day of death has come forth

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    July 18, 2007
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    scary stuff... some really nice imagery, thanks for entering...

    al