Sometimes I feel as though I'd be better off
alone
I don't need you
You annoy me
I don't hate
But dislike you
A lot
But then we have good times
Fun
Laughing
Good Memories
Things I will remember
Forever
And I know
That I need you
Author notes
I choose option 3 and LXLight 4ever
And I really would like if you tell me how to make it better thx!
A contest entry
- Family by Suberu14.
390 points, ended July 30, 2007, 24 entries
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hummm..........
do i detect an air of similarity? this kinda sounds like how i felt with becca and carrie, good poem.
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haha kathryn, this is about SIBLINGS though. Nice try.
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oh really? thought it was about me for a sec. *phew* see you in school tomorrow
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i like ur poem
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Thank you very much
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