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can haiku be written in 17 syllables or less

 

syllable drop
ghosts of haiku yet to come
don't dig, turn grave

 

歌 枕 , 枕 詞 , 枕 言 葉 , 掛 詞

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'A flash of lightning. The sound of drops among the bamboo'
http://www.flickr.com/photos/minxlj/369324736/

Pic 2 : Basho - author unknown

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  • azure85 gold member
    July 26, 2007

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    Very dramatic haiku, one which I think haijin will discuss for a long time. Thank you so much for your entry, good luck in the contest.