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couldn't keep still

i tried to draw a shadow,
couldn't keep still;
it flew from me. i wanted
more chances as i saw
them, shadow dances, sparkled
from corner to corner.
couldn't keep still;
love until dark skies wiped
out stars, no more damages
for they've dried into scars;
couldn't keep still.

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