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Accident

abated
in life,
tripping on
overexposed lies

creating
'accidental' suicides.

A contest entry

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 19, 2007
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    Powerfully written...

    And the truth spoken... I'm glad to see you've scored a silver trophy on this piece!!!


  • Floorboards
    July 14, 2007

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    i like this, certainly got me thinking anyway. thanks a lot for entering my contest and good luck to you,
    floorboards.


  • Lady Eventide
    July 14, 2007
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    Liked the rhyme scheme. Great job! All the best!

  • Leaving Today
    July 14, 2007

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    hmm, sounds dark. wish u all the best in the contest. Powerful Diction