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you did this to me ((song))

i cant controle the tears,
pouring down my face,
i cant controle the screams,
from the depths of my soul,
i cant controle the pain,
from my broken heart,
YOU DID THIS TO ME!!!!
i cant controle the tears,
pouring down my face,
i cant controle the screams,
from the depths of my soul,
i cant controle the pain,
from my broken heart,
YOU DID THIS TO ME!!!
~~~~~
you lied you cheated,
and you broke my heart,

YOU DID THIS TO ME!!

i loved you i trusted you,
i gave you my all,

YOU DID THIS TO ME!!

now,
i cant controle the tears,
pouring down my face,
i cant controle the screams,
from the depths of my soul,
i cant controle the pain,
from my broken heart,

YOU DID THIS TO ME!!!
Y-O-U D-I-D T-H-I-S T-O M-E-E-E!!
YOU DID THIS TO ME!

now i am waiting,
waiting for the pain to end,
wishing you were dead,
for all you did to me.
*i trusted you,
i thought you cared,
i loved you,
with all my heart,
i wanted to be with you,
for all eternity,
...
but now
...
i wish
...
i wish you'd die,
with all the rest,
i wish you'd feel,
all the pain you'v caused,
i wish you'd beg for mercy,
forgivness for what you did to meee!!

**i can make my wish come true,
all on my own.

ill carve my name into your chest,
making you die with all the rest,
ill do it slow and watch you bleed,
just like the pain that you caused me,

YOU'LL BE BEGGING FOR MERCY!!!
~~~~

this wouldnt have happend,
if you had just let me go,
this woldnt have happend,
if you didnt leave me with these scars,
this wouldnt have happend ,
IF YOU DIDNT DO THIS TO ME!!!
BUT...

YOU DID THIS TO ME!!!
Y-O-U D-I-D T-H-I-S T-O M-E-E-E!!
YOU DID THIS TO ME!

NOW,
i cant controle the tears,
pouring down my face,
i cant controle the screams,
from the depths of my soul,
i cant controle the pain,
from my broken heart,

oooohoooohooooh
OOOH OOOH OOOH

**i may not be able to contlemy tears,
screams
or pain,
but i CAN controle this knife,
AND
i CAN controle the way,
i end my pain.

i wish you'd die,
with all the rest,
i wish you'd feel,
all the pain you'v caused,
i wish you'd beg for mercy,
forgivness for what you did to meee!!

**the time has come,
for my wish to come true,
you will die,
AND MY PAIN WILL TOO!!!

i wish you'd die,
with all the rest,
i wish you'd feel,
all the pain you'v caused,
i wish you'd beg for mercy,
forgivness for what you did to meee!!

.....

this wouldnt have happend,
if you had just let me go,
this woldnt have happend,
if you didnt leave me with these scars,
this wouldnt have happend ,
IF YOU DIDNT DO THIS TO ME!!!
i cant controle the tears,
pouring down my face,
i cant controle the screams,
from the depths of my soul,
i cant controle the pain,
from my broken heart,
YOU DID THIS TO ME!!!
i wish you'd die,
with all the rest,
i wish you'd feel,
all the pain you'v caused,
i wish you'd beg for mercy,
forgivness for what you did to meee!!
YOU DID THIS TO ME!!
this wouldnt have happend,
if you had just let me go,
this woldnt have happend,
if you didnt leave me with these scars,
this wouldnt have happend ,
IF YOU DIDNT DO THIS TO ME!!!
i cant controle the tears,
pouring down my face,
i cant controle the screams,
from the depths of my soul,
i cant controle the pain,
from my broken heart,
YOU DID THIS TO ME!!!
i wish you'd die,
with all the rest,
i wish you'd feel,
all the pain you'v caused,
i wish you'd beg for mercy,
forgivness for what you did to meee!!
YOU DID THIS TO ME!!
this wouldnt have happend,
if you had just let me go,
this woldnt have happend,
if you didnt leave me with these scars,
this wouldnt have happend ,
IF YOU DIDNT DO THIS TO ME!!!
this wouldnt have happend,
if you had just let me go,
this woldnt have happend,
if you didnt leave me with these scars,
this wouldnt have happend ,
IF YOU DIDNT DO THIS TO ME!!!

YOU DID THIS TO ME,
YOU DID THIS TO ME,
YOU DID THIS TO ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author notes

i wrote this after haveing a dream. i guess i get alot of my poems fromdreams....well, i hope you enjoyed this one, its not my best but it works!!

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    repetitive
    almost all
    the way
    down
    the page


  • Naridill
    August 16, 2007

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    Seems a little repetitive but the words tell alot. I like the flow and the word play.
    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.