I would not walk in front of you,
I am not a more powerful being,
I don't wish to walk behind you,
For I am not submissive,
Just let me walk beside you,
Holding your hand,
Giving you all the love that I possess.
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Picture number 3
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
900 points, ended July 23, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *POW* = Poem of the Week ~* by Arkbear.
500 points, ended July 16, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful sentiments, i'm assuming this was written for the last picture however, it sounds a lot like an old saying and i'm not sure of the words right now but pretty close to what you are saying here. i know the words aren't exact but it sounds to close to a popular saying, the sentiments though as i've said are very emotion filled
best of luck. be well and be blessed
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this will be our judging system:
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spelling & grammer: 1-20
originality: 1-20
how well you handled the prompt: 1-20
overall: 1-20
so please look over your poem and mae sure you did your best with these catagories and feel free to make changes before i judge. again, best of luck to you and do not rate our comments or message us back until after contest is jugded. thank you. be well and be blessed*rose -
Not bad.....however..>>>
I need you to dip your Quill a bit deeper and reach out for
what you are not accustomed to writing and pen me
something that is going to make me want to personally
hand you the Trophy for Poem of the Week myself ~
This is good....but the POW wants GREAT!
I see talent in your Quill.... now show me the magic within!
The new POD is up for today & tomorrow ~
Bear ~
I would not walk in front of you,
I am not a more powerful being,
I don't wish to walk behind you,
For I am not submissive,
Just let me walk beside you,
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Very good I have a poem alot like that one two. Well written
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