poke her
here
poker
there
fun
and
games
Author notes
i love both
A contest entry
- The Shape of Haiku by azure85.
790 points, ended July 30, 2007, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh my, this is clever. It could hold multiple meanings, this is nicely done. Thank you so much for your entry.
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I guess you just like games of poke-and-hope, huh? LOL
I really enjoyed the "playfulness" and humor of this haiku! Best wishes to you in the contest!
Jo -
Thank you for entering our workshop/contest, "The Shape of the Haiku." Good luck.
poke her
here
poker
there
fun
and
games
I think that you have done very well with this haiku and concrete form. You leave the interpretation of the haiku up to the reader and that is what all good hajin hope to be able to do. Good job. -
hehe, a bit dirty eh, but nothing less than fun and games. Well put with the title and the voice of the piece, i like the old play on word referenced, and I enjoy the hanging lines too, as if to seperate each idea but still found in the same central place, they ultimately belong together. Good luck in the contest.
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hehhe..loved the fun in this...reminds me of those games for sure...Excleent Haiku....
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