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Willow tree

willow tree

clear
sparkling stream

drinking water

A contest entry

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  • azure85 gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    A very nice haiku, and I did read everyone's comments too like Pollycheck. A nice set of images within your haiku, and I like the way you have shaped the words.


  • Pollycheck
    July 15, 2007
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    Thank you for entering our workshop/contest The Shape of the Haiku. Good luck. I had a little trouble figuring ut this haiku until I read the comments. Maybe I am just a little bit dense tonight. After I read the comments, the haiku made perfect sense.


  • sheltered
    July 14, 2007
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    I like the doudle meaning here. Wher you or the tree could be drinking the water. Superb job.


  • Deindichter
    July 14, 2007

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    This is some beautiful imagery. I love the title, its very serene, along with a poem to match uncannily (is this a word?); well put in this haiku, good luck in the contest.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 14, 2007

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    What a beautiful picture you have
    painted here with your words.
    Well done and good luck to you
    with this one my friend!




    Jeremy0826


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 14, 2007

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    Lovely Haiku, peaceful, serene...could envision it...well done Bro...Best of Luck

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