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mystery novel
A contest entry
- The Shape of Haiku by azure85.
790 points, ended July 30, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for entering our workshop/contest, "The Shape of the Haiku." Good luck.
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mystery novel
I really like this haiku, but I am struggling as to whether or not it is statements or images. I really can't tell on this one. I love the aha moment in the third line. -
This is an excellent haiku, and using the concrete format makes this a lovely mystery to read. Thank you so much for this wonderful haiku.
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Excellent. That's about as mysterious as it can get. Great pun.
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by the way, good luck on the contest!
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Nice play on words. Witty in your decision to claim that a mystery novel, the true mystery is what was on those pages to require them to be printed naked, or be turned it? the title works well with this too, good going.
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Ohhhh so intriguing, can feel the mysteriousness...Haiku-you...Bless you my darling!
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