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A Year Ago Today

It was on this day,
One year ago,
That you decided that you could take,
The one thing that I valued most.

You stole my virginity,
And threw it in my face,
To say that you only did it,
Because I looked so sad.

That was a lame arse excuse,
And one that I will never accept.
Because of what you did,
I will never be the same again.

One year ago today,
You decided you could have me,
I had only had a few drinks,
I wasn't even tipsy.

What made you think you could do that?
On that cold winters night?
To rape me so that you,
Could get some to satisfy yourself?

You ruined my life this time last year,
And I added another scar to my leg,
To numb out the pain,
That you had caused so deep within.

I will never forgive you,
For stealing what was mine,
I really do hope you burn in hell,
You poor pathetic excuse for a human being.

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This is for option 2

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  • February Moon gold member
    July 29, 2007

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    So sad, I really was close to tears. I just don't like the way it was written though, but I suppose that goes with raw emotion. Thank you for entering though, I hope you understand me removing this piece.
    Chelsea


  • A Poet Named Kyoto
    July 21, 2007

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    This poem is wonderful, I can really feel the emotion you put into it, great flow. Possibly a better line so that it fits better with the rest of the poem.