Dive down waterfalls
rushing senses
Mist from instinct
enveloping lovers
Douse passion's spontenaity
with heaven.
A contest entry
- Super quickie PIF - 12 by Namita.
300 points, ended July 14, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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is this word really spelt correct? "spontenaity"
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Oh wow, this was fantastic. You did a stellar job.
Best of luck.
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a beautifal poem so full of images and emotions. you used realy strong powerful words to make it a provoking poem. well done and good luck.
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"Dive down waterfalls
rushing senses
Mist from instinct
enveloping lovers
Douse passion's spontenaity
with heaven. "
This was the poem you finished before the time limit. is is a very beautiful poem. Wonderful word choice and execution. Really like this one. Best og luck in the contest. -
HMMM...stirs up emotions... good one.. All the very best!
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Thanxx for entering. The category is WATER. And you, as number 3 prompt is - "Mist"
Luv,
Candy
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