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Choke.

Choke me, Please choke me to death
I want to know what it feels like
to be murdered by someone who I thought...
loved me.
I want to know what it feels like
to understand betrayal
To fully experience something
I thought to be amazing
come to a close
Please Choke me
I want to see the light
and finally see if there is an
Oldsmobile waiting there for me on the other side
I talk about it enough
Please.
I want you to kill me.
If you can't love me,
please I want you to hate me.
String together all the missing peices
and right before you figure it out
let everything fall to the floor
Please wrap your arms around my throught
I will try my best not to struggle
although I do think it is human nature
I want your hands inprinted on my neck...
your favorite place to be kissed
I want those hands to kill me
I want those hands to end me
Please, I am begging you just Choke me.

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  • Dances In The Rain
    July 16, 2007

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    wow i really love all the emotion in this. people will probably get freaked out about it but HA! to them. i understand. awesome work, sami!


    • artisticxpoetry
      July 16, 2007
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      haha thanks stef! I was having a morbid day and just finished reading this amazing book called choke. I was gonna make this stab. but ehhh, I kept misspelling things and it didn't work as well. =]