Forever went
Away too fast
Did you forget
It is me that
Never left you
Giving you
All I have
Willingly, with the knowledge
And your promise
You'd never leave
In a list
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward Quickie (5x10x20) by Faded.
400 points, ended July 14, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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and i promise that i will never leave... beautiful, one of my favorites by you! congrats on the bronze
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Congrats on the bronze. Nicely done. Personally I think you deserve more than that, but I don't have enough points for a contest...haha I always love your simplistically short power pieces, and this one is no exception!
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Awesome work, great poem too - 100 percent A+
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I think that sometimes the short powerful poems are underestimated. This contained no 'frills'. I loved it's simplicity- it seemed to draw even more to what you're saying.
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Oh I love this one
It is beautiful, hit's very close to home and expresses very well what it is like to love and be forgotten love fades away
very good write
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Your prompt is "Faded." Good luck! You have 20 mins to write 10 lines
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