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Fields of Baby Girl


flitting little dragonfly
flirts with raspberry dewdrops
that bathe the clover fruit--

her loveliness engulfs them
as rainbow flowers sky

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 14, 2007

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    A truly stunning write with such gorgeous imagery. A real stand out winner Congratulations Ten


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    July 14, 2007

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    This is absolutely beautiful and such a pleasure to read. Amazing vocab and imagery. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.