I think I would be the best
cause I know I wouldn't be the best
which makes me the best
choice for a sister
so what do you say?
*puppy dog face*
now you know you can't say no
to a face like that
or that would be cruel
but if you do
just remember I'll still love you
Author notes
haha hope you enjoy this piece... xx-why-xx ... yea yea so i got bored and saw your contest on herer had to enter =]
A contest entry
- WANTED AP FAMILY by Darc Soul.
550 points, ended July 27, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good
lol I loved the puppy dog face! This is a good poem. It is confusing in the beginning, but that also makes it good. It is short and sweet. I'm sure the person you wrote this poem to would love to have you as a sister! I also liked the last two lines, that rhyme just made it better! Good job and Keep Writing!
-Shadow
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