Lips,soft feathers kiss my cheek
Flight the morning,still and silent
Wondering if reality will fly away
Time a vacuum of the moment,soon gone
Life with you,a proponent of new days
Passing like clouds in a blue sky
Moments of passion,shared in honesty
Free a bird in flight,as light arrives
Thought of time and this wonderful moment
Tomorrow will come like a storm on the horizon
Treasure this time as it will pass like the day
Every move, happiness is now and you are mine.
Please tell me what you think
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really beautiful feel to it special the last line seems to linger on your mind
great works
love pauline
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Roseleaf
Thank you ,I appreciate your vision and valued comments..Take Care Gordie.
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this is beautiful....have been ill for 3 weeks hope to see you soon...val
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val-john11
Thank you for your kind comment..I hope you will be ok and returned to total health soon. Take care and look after yourself >>>Gordie.
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Beautiful Write
Good Morning Gordie, Your words were quite beautiful. Very soft and sweet. You imagery was so lovely and makes one sigh and long for the one they love. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. This was a pleasure to read this morning. You take care.
Sandy
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sandygram
As always a pleasure to read your valued comments..Thank you for your talents and I wish you all good things. Take care Gordie.
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