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Moments

I wake up every morning
to the same ole boring news
get up and go to work and then come home
But I want something more, something new

I want to feel the spark in my life someday
The one that lights the fire of excitement and love
Im tired of being the picture with a broken frame
I wanna see what im really made of

I want to feel the wind blow through my hair
At the top of the highest mountain
Be kissed at the right moment giving me butterflies
And make wishes on pennys throwing them into a fountain

I want to make love until the sunrise begins
I want to slow dance in the moon-lit rain
To let my feet get dirty as i walk on a dirt road
And jump into the nearest river, washing away all the pain

I want to see the dandalions dance through the air
In a field full of flowers, the sun shining on me from above
As i walk down a path in a white dress
And say "I Do" to the one that I love

To have a child someday in the future
That will realize sooner than me
To live his his/her life to the fullest
And be everything and anything they want to be

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  • Owl33
    February 29, 2008

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    You paint such nice pictures with words! I can so vividly see in my mind every image you create! Better yet I can see you playing the role of your words and enjoying all that will hopefully bring some sparkle to your life! Nice work Mindie!


  • Your Angel Of Music
    July 14, 2007
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    Nice write I could totally see the whole imagery! Great Job!