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Concert of Roses

Luminous shades of red

 

motion in

                 swirls

 

like symphonic music

 

            curving

 

twists

 

                       Falling

         around me

 

sweeping

themselves into rose petals

 

Author notes

PROMPT: ROSE DREAMS

In a list

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  • ronnica
    August 3, 2007

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    Yes it is almost into a rose, a red rose, such dreams. Reminds me of the chinese acrobats with their long floaring long ribbons,


  • dixiebme
    July 14, 2007

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    I like the way you swirled the write, just like a rose. What a wonderful gift God gave to everyone. You do have a talent. Good write!


  • Avendesora Dreamer
    July 13, 2007

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    "motion in

    swirls



    like symphonic music".....I really like how you turned movement into sound into something tangible

    thanks for the entry and good luck!


  • Avendesora Dreamer
    July 13, 2007
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    the prompt: rose dreams