Lying next to you
upon garden grass
& talking
underneath the moonlight,
imagining we’re far
from humanity,
inside of Eden.
A contest entry
- 10/20/10, quickie time! by Avendesora Dreamer.
475 points, ended July 13, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is amazing. i love the imagery put into this. for a minute or two i was sitting there imagining the scene. so full of love and affection. a wonderful write. well done
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Okay thats a different take on the prompt~ you did a great job! good luck in the contest!
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...take me with you?...
...this feels like love, and peace
thank you for the entry and good luck! -
the prompt: rose dreams
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