My mind slips
into a sanguine sea,
savoring
ecstasy's wine,
desire's
red roses
caresses
in passion's
intoxication.
Waking,
petal's scent
lingers.
Author notes
Prompt - Rose Dreams
A contest entry
- 10/20/10, quickie time! by Avendesora Dreamer.
475 points, ended July 13, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congrats!
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Thank you. I can't believe tonight.
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OH la la~ what a write! nice job my friend~ I liked this! Good luck in the contest!
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the best dreams of all leave their mark on our senses upon awakening....I love your word choice and the image said words evoke? sublime
thanks for the entry and good luck! -
the prompt: rose dreams
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