Perfection chemically grown
from thought wombs,
planting futures
Roseaceous contemplations
of premature seedlings
Watering life in
ego
Baptized in
reality
A contest entry
- 10/20/10, quickie time! by Avendesora Dreamer.
475 points, ended July 13, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Mmmm. I absolutely adore the ending... it has a lot to do with things that are happening at the moment.
Lovely lovely lovely Nate.
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Nice take on the prompt~ you did a terrific job~ good luck in the contest!
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"Roseaceous" great word...and intersting thought throughout...its at once beautiful and chillingly clinical
thanks for the entry and good luck! -
the prompt: rose dreams
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