Peaceful and then loud...
glittering walls turn to waste
crying out with sadness
attention waiting...
Author notes
Palace of confusion
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward Quickie 10x15x20 by Twins 4 me.
450 points, ended July 13, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice take on the prompt
all of your words were well said
i like this line tho
glittering walls turn to waste
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very good! I love the emotion in this. Great imagery. Thanks for entering!
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this is really good a great take on the prompt...good luck
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Prompt: Palace of confusion
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