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Castle of Confusion

past moat of maybe
across bridge of hope
lie ecstacy's halls
but bastion's crumbling rejection



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  • Twins 4 me
    July 13, 2007
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    This is great. This really captures confusion. Great imagery. Thanks for entering!


  • Twins 4 me
    July 13, 2007
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    Prompt: Palace of confusion