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Never will I learn

I’m writing through fingertips of pain
I can barely see through the blur of my tears
I’m crying for no reason but can’t seem to stop
One day I’ll look back and laugh at these years
I’ve done it again, I even knew better
Now angry music invades my ears
Trying to drown out the misery in me
Trying to chase away all my fears
Sanity is no longer an issue
I can see that I’m crazy when I look in the mirror
When will I learn, perhaps I never will
My mind always shouts, but my heart never hears

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  • Aiyoris Maryian
    August 5, 2007

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    Your heart? Hah! You should take a peek at mine. I'm trying to stop hurting so I write about it, trying to convince myself that I'm okay. Angry music is in your ears, but depressing country music is in mine. Yeah, I listen to country.


  • going nowhere
    July 13, 2007
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    wow!!! filled with emotion and pain... poetry is a good way to vent. smoothly written.


    • Snowflake11
      July 13, 2007
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      Thanks, I was just so upset that I just wrote what came to my mind without even really thinking that much. I didn't event try to find a contest for it.


  • Bohemian Complex
    July 13, 2007

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    This reminds me of my high school years, and how they were a living hell. But these years are not eternal, no matter how long they may seem.

    Well penned; your imagery was vivid.

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