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Pale Reminder

Scrawled, the dust of ages
     (though blood once wrote vibrant red),

upon tinged memories
smudged by disappointment’s drowning,

encrypted once , “I love you,”
cowers, in a crevice
reserved for nightmare

his heart, his quickly glancing eye--

remain there
. . .upon a simple post-it note

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  • Hadji Murad
    July 14, 2007
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    I'm counting 12 lines...