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i hate

Theres nothing to me
nothing to see.
I cant even be,
who i truely want to be.

I dont get why the world is like this,
I hate everything about this.
I hate being inlove wit a girl a million miles away,
I want to see her all the time everyday.

I cry just thinking about her,
I wish we could just run away.
See her and know thats shes here to stay.
I love you baby and i need to know,
If your here for me or just for show.

I cant deal with this anymore,
I dream of her as my eyes begin to pour.
I hate the fact that i cant be in your arms,
My world is crumbling i hear the alarms.
theyre telling me to run and never come back,
But knowledge of where to go is what i lack.

Please come rescue me from this world of hell,
I was wanting you and i just fell.
I hate the dreams that torture me,
Come in my sleep of what we should be.

I love you i need you be with me and lets run away,
I hate feeling like this why do i have to pay...

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  • B0b
    April 12, 2008

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    baby im sorry if this upsets u but yeah....do u really hate bein in love with me??? i mean cuz of the distances?


  • B0b
    October 9, 2007
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    please baby....cheer up...i know it hurts..please....i love you so much...i am your girl


    • jstrauch
      October 15, 2007
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      ull forever be my girl cause i love u and im cheered up cause of ur long messages i wrote this when i was upset but u made everything better just from telling me u love me


  • Transcend All
    July 13, 2007

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    Transcend All

    I remember the pain of "her" the first one I saw that went straight through to my heart and I realized that my family's religious world of judgment would only be the beginning to the hate in this world, But the pain of not being together was so real. You have such real emotion put in this piece, emotion that transcended me to that time when I longed for her and it couldn't be,the world just never felt right. Thank you for sharing so much of yourself, I wish there were more than three applause.

    Namaste'