shut the prison bars!
incarcerate the Bill of Rights
behind your pious ramblings
extol the freedom of duct-taped speech
pedestal the freedom of shredded press
worship the freedom of interrupted assembly
and, while you're at it, could you, uh
pass the mustard?
In a list
A contest entry
- Super Quickie - Emoticon Inspiration by Ryno.
300 points, ended July 13, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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That is..
so clever and turned into such a witty poem by the last line. I like your humour!
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Enjoyed this witty piece; it made me smile and got me thinking about the bans and aids all boxed in one (lol). Great short right! (oops, I mean: "write").
AsIThink...
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lol!!!! this is really funny!! congrats on the silver trophy! -Slick
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Nice
I can appreciate the wit behind this poetic piece, and I like how you made a few points, so true sadly, but points nonetheless in your piece of humor.. Love your talent. Thanks for sharing, Timothy~
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Love the "dry" humor behind these lines.
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This was an amazing interpretation of a very difficult prompt. It was a bold political statement couched in a humorous poem. Congratulations on your trophy. It was well deserved. Peace, Liz
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Cute ending to this one - ban the prompt, great the write. A lovely silver winner - congrats on this write.
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well done...very very funny..lmao @ extol the freedome of duct-taped speech..
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rofl&lmao...
while were still doing word play, your a COMIZ, you know that?
(thats COMIC WIZ
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awesome job with your hard prompt and thanks for the entry.
Ryan -
This is a strong emotionial take on being ban alright.
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