I thought we agreed
Agreed to be just friends
But you couldnt deal with that
You wanted love that never ends
We agreed we would wait
That highschool came first
That nothing romantic would happen yet
But it's for deep love that you thirst
I was so naive
To think that it would work
That you could pull it together
So feelings of lust would not lurk
I thought we had an agreement
That we would wait until then
Where just friends would surfice
I didnt believe this could happen- not back when
You dont understand - I'm not ready
I hope you'll listen when i try to explain
That we took it too fast altogether
I'm sorry I caused you this pain
Author notes
ahh, fresh poetry from still open wounds...
W&K options love, dark and rhyme
A contest entry
- 5 Options, 5 Winners by Forlorn Dreams.
525 points, ended July 14, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Still don't know what love is.... by flyingphoenix.
850 points, ended July 15, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol bahahaha!! flyless strikes again lmao! xx
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yay! great work!! well i have one word for u...flyless!
hehe xx
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bahahaha! LMAO!!!!!!!!! flyless struck again last nite!!! we were at life groups and i'm just like pfft! he's wearing those pants again!!! oh, and he cant take "I'm just not ready yet" as an answer! i'll explain soon... thanks for checkn this out
xoxo
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A nice write. Sometimes it can be hard to wait, but when both parties have made an arangement that should be stuck too.
Good flow and rhyming here, all in all a great write!
Thanks for entering and good luck
Webber
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hey thanks
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aww hun this is great. but did it really happen give me the lowdown
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hey babe yes this really did happen.. and its driving me insane coz i havent had the opportunity to straighten it all out!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!!! but it should be ok sometime down the track... i just hope that i dont lose the friendship i hav (or i dont know, possibly had... now) with his sister...
thanks for the comment and applause
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beautiful, i was in a situation like this once, but it was slightly different. i loved it! good luck and thanks for entering!
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hey thanks for the HM!!!! very appreciated. and thanks for taking the time to check this out. Ampd
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