Falling thunder from God’s heavens
As Mother nature hails the seas
Lighting projected upon the earth
With fierce bolts of force
Illuminating the skies as the beckon prayers
Of the Rain Angel upon her knees
Dominate the skies with her power
Producing rain and wind on the land
Ocean roars upon the rocks
Thrusting the waves into the clouds
Unimaginable streams of rain
Falls with the returning force
Down her face absorbing her request
Calmly she retreats her prayers
Enjoying the lavished light in the sky
And the fragrance of the rain on her skin
A contest entry
- The Angel of Rain by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended July 17, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Give Me All Your Gold~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended July 26, 2007, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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elegant poem,
short and filled with substance.
good luck in the contest!!
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Hmm...I like these images...they are seraphic...and that's an appropriate word because this about prayer...good job....I like this idea.
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Wow thank you what a beautiful thing to say, It is of a rain Angel. Thank you for your beautiful and tranquil comments
(LISA)
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WONDERFUL!
wow, I can see how this peice got the gold trophy! good job! keep up your good work! I know if my grandpa could read this, he would cry! actually, I'm sure he's reading it now... haha. he's in heaven crying knowing that I could read this! Great job! keep up your good work! this is the kind of stuff I like the see! write on!
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Sorry about you grandpa, For I lost my Grandma and she was every thing to me. MAybe they know each other in heaven? Thank you for your beautiful review it means alot to me. (LISA)
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Maybe they do know each other in Heaven! that's a cool thought.
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beautiful very piercing to the heart dear i loved it to death. calmy she retreats her prayers enjoying the lavished light in the sky and the fragrance of the rain on her skin stole me this was well deserved
i love you dangerously
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Wow sis you going to make me cry
This was a last minute write And it payed off. I am happy you liked it, Like I tell you I want to be just like you when I grow up. Hehehe Thank you for the great review love you sis (LISA)
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Nature should get back at us sometimes for being the way we are. If nature did this often as we did our bad doing, however, global warming would not be so much of an issue...
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True word my friend, Thank you for you review and taking the time to read my write, (LISA)
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Absolutely gorgeous! Many congrats on the gold ...
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Thank you Dear for I read your write and it was an outstanding Piece. Congratulation On the Bronze to you too. Thank you for your beatiful comments. (LISA)
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I cannot believe no one has looked this entry or even commented on it until now. You have truly penned a gem! I want to thank you for entering my "The Angel of Rain" contest.
Ted E
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I saw this contest just a few days ago and thought the picture was a great inspiration. So I gave it a try, But am really Amazed at the out come. For I read some to the entries and they were awesome. With great imagery, I thank you so much for the Gold Trophy and your grand review. Greatly appreciated. Thanks again for a amazing contest *roe* (LISA)
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