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Peace of Silence

I sit back in my chair ready to indulge in what the night has to offer.

The records spin at an uncontrollable volume, and there's
not a moment of it not to love.

The warmth takes hold of body, and mind starts to betray the senses.

Taking the edge off of another day, the chair begins to swallow
all preconceived notions.

Eyes rolling back into skull and limbs stretched out
to the ends of the early evening.

Everything that once was happening stops and speeds up simultaneously.
Things seem to be tied together with strands of confusion,
but in the good way...

The constant harping of all the days rough points begins to silence
and body and mind sift through each other
only to discover new worlds of their own.

In but their respective places can they find peace...

Peace of mind
Peace of body
Peace of silence

Peace of the retroactive day that you initially tried to escape from
but in turn only created a new day to be discovered.

Will the new day mind the indulgences of what the night prior had to offer?

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  • Desire gold member
    July 20, 2007

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    Wow!

    When I inhaled Your words, it felt as if I was on a meditative Journey~
    and You the tour guide
    Powerful piece with words to soothe the senses~
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Appreciate Your visit to my work

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • Kyn
      July 20, 2007
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      Well thank you very much! I'm certainly glad I didn't bore you to death! =)

      Please feel free to stop on by more often!