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Cocaine



Come take my ride
only you can play
cashing in on
another day
i never thought
needing you would dominate
every move I made


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  • acari27 gold member
    March 15, 2008
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    simple, so much in it


  • My Darkness
    July 18, 2007

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    this is a powerful and revealing write, i do not support such actions, but i am no better... you and i are so alike, it's crazy... keep your head up


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    So true...it will rob your soul, rape your inner self and leave you bleeding in hell with no requirement....well done...


  • moonlitmirror
    July 14, 2007

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    How could someone not read a poem entitled "Cocaine"? The title definately drew me to it.

    I like how you spin the title, though. I think that many people could relate to this--its short, but its straightforward and honest. When thoughts circle in your head and you dont see anything but the person who seems to haunt your thoughts, it definately feels like theyre dominating your life.

    I like this, a lot. Good luck in the contest!

    ~blessings~

    ~rora


  • Roargh
    July 13, 2007
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    beautiful in it's own way

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