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The Story of Count Crimson Chapter 3

Chapter 3
Not being able to find his love Count went into a slump and was very miserable, and sat in the castle all night his father and step mother kept the search up. Count just excepted the worst by this time he presumed that Sapphire was dead. So Count tried to move on with his life. He ended up leaving the castle for many years and went touring the world looking for many new kinds of creatures such as himself. Wondering around the Mibuu Mountains in Japan he came across a creature that he had never seen before. The creature was covered in fur and had monstrous teeth capable of crushing anything. Count was not sure to kill this beautiful creature or kill it. The young creature roared and then fell over.
Count felt sorry for the creature and helped nurse him back to health ,once the young creature was strong enough to move he got up and thanked Count. Count was now curious about this creature and asked him what he was and what had happened. The creature called himself a werewolf and said that his name was Blood Thurst. The young wolf began to tell Count about how he tried to stop his pack form attacking a clan of vampyres not far from them. This interested Count more because he didn’t know how theses creatures knew about vampyres. Blood then told him about how they tried to kill him because he didn’t want to attack the vampyres but he wanted to talk to them.
This enraged the rest of his pack, as Blood was finishing the story growls could be heard in the distance. Before Count and Blood knew it the whole pack had them surrounded Count pulled his trident from his back and began to fight back the werewolves. Blood stood in shock and saw them attacking Count He didn’t like this razor sharp claws emerged from his paws and he turned on his own kind and helped Count. Finally after about and hour of fighting there lay dozens of dead and injured werewolves’. Counts shoulder was bleeding pretty badly from where he had gotten stabbed in the shoulder with a set of claws.  Count passes out and awakens in a cave around a fire with a bear skin blanket on him He sits up and looks around he sees in the shadows golden eyes and then the eyes began to come towards him and Blood emerged from the shadows.
Count begins to talk but then grabs his shoulder in pain. Blood tells him that he needs to rest and that this was payback for taking care of him. Count then lays back down and asks Blood what he plans to do with the pack now? Blood thought about it for a minute and then said he wasn’t sure, Count encouraged him to take over the pack and become the Alpha Male. Blood after a while liked the idea and took the position and Count helped him establish his the pack. After a while Count left Blood to lead the pack on his own and began out on his adventure again.           

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  • Adb5121967
    August 4, 2007

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    5 stars just for effort.

    You know, I really enjoyed this, and actually it is very similar to the style of poetry written by Englishman Chris Vaughan ( Anklescar ), who used to be on The Poet's Workshop. But this poem is really more like a short story than it is a true poem, but it's a great work of literary art, nonetheless. Reviewed by ADB5121967.


  • L. J. Arien
    July 14, 2007
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    very cool though. and i forgots your clappies agains. grrs


  • L. J. Arien
    July 14, 2007
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    What? I'm not in the story! *snaps* lol

  • Shade Aurelia
    July 13, 2007

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    Interesting...very interesting. I'm writing the story of Shade as we speak, but I dunno if I'll post it. But this was good.

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