As we embark on this epic journey
As you slip your hand in mine
I will walk step mirroring your step
And support you when you may lose your balance
This road will be frought with difficuty
We will falter more than once
But I know that our smiles will outweigh the tears
And the rainbows will fill our sunny skies
Do not let another steal your heart
I will keep my best just for you
I will love you to the depths of the sea
I give you my years, my everlasting love, my everything.
Author notes
Marriage is an epic journey, a full time preoccupation, work!!!
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Comments
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I love this part!
This road will be frought with difficuty
We will falter more than once
But I know that our smiles will outweigh the tears
And the rainbows will fill our sunny skies
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the love you hold is within
i think the love is truely shown here



