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Know Me

Open your eyes
To cry.
Hold on tightly and never
Let me go.
Too far away to catch you,
Yet I still see you fall.

Curl up,
Cry yourself to sleep.
Dream of me.
My lips move but you can't hear me.

Eternally linked through
Dreams.
Meet in my dreams:
The only one who knows me.
Trespass through my memories and
Drink your fill.

I know you.
I know every step you take,
Every world you skip through is my own.
You arethe only one that I can
Truly understand.

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  • Dovina
    July 14, 2007

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    This is a very good write.
    "Meet in my dreams:
    The only one who knows me.
    Trespass through my memories and
    Drink your fill" are my fav lines.
    Good luck in the contest!


  • dream5111
    July 14, 2007

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    "Curl up,
    Cry yourself to sleep.
    Dream of me.
    My lips move but you can't hear me." is my favorite part good luck