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Playground of Sorrow

Missing image
Shifting friendships
scraped knees

sun ushers new day.

Playground of sorrow
seems less cruel tomorrow.

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  • Whoochi gold member
    July 14, 2007
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    Absolutely splendid, I see why it took the gold!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    July 13, 2007
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    AWE this was wonderful congradulations. Well deserved.


  • Twins 4 me
    July 13, 2007
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    I like this. It has a happy ending to it! Great imagery and emotion too! Thanks for entering.


  • Twins 4 me
    July 13, 2007
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    Prompt: Playground of sorrow