Another dark
night to recover
giving moisture to
earth's barren
land
Only I can
fill the ocean
Replenshing resources
another has taken
in greed and unnecessarily
no man respects my land
In a list
A contest entry
- The Angel of Rain by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended July 17, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow, great write... congrats on the honorable mention, gotta love the greenies! woot!
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I see she did a marvelous job filling that ocean. Not only is she the angel of rain, but a protector of life as she replenishes it for everyone (as the message I took from your impressive little poem). I want to thank you for entering my "The Angel of Rain" contest.
Ted E
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I liked it alot!
Can you tell me how to write like that?!
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