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a wistful welfare
fingers choke -
super strength
under threadbare bruise
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Author notes
watched a video for a contest...kind of made me wonder about my own wounds, and my own feelings. hence, this.
A contest entry
- 10:10:10 QUICKE! [but do you dare enter, differently posted] by Naridill.
550 points, ended July 13, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely penned, emotional and very powerful captivation.



