Night
rainbow skies
fading sight.
Spinning bright
starry eyes
late at night.
Silver light
she cries
fading sight.
Moon at height
smiles and sighs
Night.
Eternal fight
sun rise
fading sight.
Brightest might
high she flies
Night.
fading sight.
Author notes
a minimalist villanelle.
I chose a villanelle written in a poetry class and reworked and changed it here to fit a minimalist style. I think I like it better than the original. ^_^
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- Sunrises and Sunsets by Silent Hawk.
875 points, ended September 9, 2007, 18 entries
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Once Again
another I am not familiar with. However the style lent itself to holding my attention. Cause the thoughts were kind of stacato. Well Done!
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